PARTING IS SUCH SWEET SHALLOW
For the past half century
enjoying an unprecedented
state of peace and prosperity
I savored the muscular memory
of my signature hand
how it held
firm
moist
the curve
of your pubis
It has been
two years
since …
I am beginning to lose
my
g
r
i
?
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Your attempt at poetry is nothing short of tasteless. This insignificant piece of so-called literature is the reason modern poetry is lacking in both talent and substance.
The unsettling theme of sexuality and lust apparent in several of your works cannot help but make me think as if I am reading the scrawled fantasies of a young, pubescent child. Your inexperience shines through your scattered attempts at real poetry - which also manifests your sexist outlook and blatant ignorance towards women. Your sub-par poetry recurs continuously, with no sign of slowing - a somewhat dismal thought of what's to come in your inevitable approaching work.
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